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Thu Apr 6, 2006, 3:33 AM

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  • Current Residence: South London
  • Interests: Yes.
  • Favourite movie: The Shawshank Redemption
  • Favourite band or musician: Evanescence\Pink Floyd\Muse
  • Favourite genre of music: Glamorous Indie Rock And Roll
  • Favourite poet or writer: Raymond Chandler\\ Emily Dickinson
  • Operating System: Windows XP
  • MP3 player of choice: I-Pod Nano
  • Shell of choice: Conch
  • Favourite gaming platform: PS3
  • Personal Quote: "I almost had a psychic girlfriend...but she left me before we met."

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:iconlilliopian:
Hmm. You have a neat approach to your literature. It has a dark and brooding but also conveys a hopeful message within your poetry. I like it.

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The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious.
:iconlilliopian:
'dark and brooding aura about it'

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The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious.
:iconbekkia:
You say you want feedback. On anything specific?
:iconsparks018:
Please accept my apologies for the lethargy of my response:

In terms of specifics I'm not too sure really. I have ideas and try to put them into words, and rely a great deal on metaphor - but neither of these factors really ensure something is, at its heart, ' poetic '. I suppose I am interested in whether the ideas I am penning come across effectively in the form I have chosen. I have been told before by some that some of what I write would be better presented in a prose or essay format, but I'm eager for other people's opinions.

Many Thanks!!

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"I thoroughly disapprove of duels. If a man should challenge me, I would take him kindly and forgivingly by the hand and lead him to a quiet place and kill him."

Mark Twain
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:iconshecanread:
Thanks for the fav and watch :heart:
:iconsadisticicecream:
You're welcome. :)

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